Wednesday, July 6, 2011

The Three Billy Goats Gruff

Room 9 has been learning how to construct a Narrative.  We have been learning the structure of a Narrative so that we can begin to learn how to tell great stories.

Lavaeda began like this  -  One day there were three billy goats Gruff who wanted.
 to go to the other side of the hill. 

Levi continues...  The three billy goats Gruff wanted to cross the bridge but the Troll didn't want them to

Lose says.... They all wanted to go to the hill across the bridge because there was lovely sweet grass to eat.

Levi G says....  The little billy goat went to the bridge....."Who's that on MY BRIDGE!" said the Troll.  "It's me" said the goat.

Sifila says.....  The Troll said, "I will GOBBLE you up!"  "Don't eat me!  My big brother is going to come" said the little goat.  The the Troll said, "SO, off you go."

Taki says.... The middle sized goat cam to eat the grass.

Timote quips....  Then the Troll said, "Who's that coming over MY BRIDGE!"  "It's me the middle goat"  The Troll said, "I want to gobble you up!"

Mackenzie says...  The middle billy goat said, "No, no, no!  You can eat my big brother, he's coming soon. 

Fetu says.....   So she ran over the bridge and ate the sweet grass with little billy goat Gruff.

Fusi ....  Next, the bib big brother cam onto the bridge and he heard the Troll say, "Who is going over MY BRIDGE!"

Etai concludes....  So the big billy goat Gruff put his head straight and butted him over the bridge because was a mean old Troll!!



2 comments:

  1. Hi Room 9,
    What a great narrative. It was good that you could all work together and make the story flow so well.
    Good work,
    Tsana
    (Karl & Robin's mum)

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  2. hi room nine I love reading your narrative story I felt very good that you work as a team I enjoyed reading it

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