Monday, August 20, 2012

Lisa and Freemantle by Aarmione

Once upon a time there lived a mermaid named Lisa and her best friend dolphin named Freemantle.They loved to go on lots of adventures and solve mysteries while they swam around the very big cities of Mermaid Island.

One day when they were swimming,a net fell on Freemantle and he dodged but he was too late.Lisa thought a little bit  then she remembered that when she was born,the Queen Mermaid crowned her the Princess of Mermaid Island and gave her powers at the main palace of Mermaid Island,but she also crowned Freemantle as the prince of mermaid Island and gave him powers to save peoples lives and solve problems that the other people make on the Island.

After that Lisa says ‘Ok Freemantle,here's what we're going to do,you go back a bit while I use my Mermaid powers to free you from that net and then we’ll pay those fishermen a little visit,what do you say Freemantle’?.Then Freemantle said ‘ok  Lisa lets do it.So then Lisa made a hole in the net for Freemantle but while the fishermen kept struggling but when Lisa used her powers the net fell back on the boat.

Next Lisa and Freemantle went up to the fishermen and said’Why are you fishing here?this Island belongs to us, Mermaids.The fishermen then said’Well we didn't know that Mermaids live here’.So Lisa thought a little bit then said ‘I am going to put a curse around Mermaid Island and if  you come back to this Island with nets and place them in the water then the curse will be detected then something will happen to you’.

so then Lisa quickly wrote down on a piece of paper a contract and they made a deal that every now and then they would visit without nets and as soon they set the deal, they said goodbye to each other then they all left and so every  few weeks the fishermen would visit Lisa and Freemantle.And of course they lived happily ever after.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Aarmione,
    I enjoyed reading your story about Lisa and her dolphin friend, Freemantle (did you know that "Fremantle" is in Western Australia, and is where the America's Cup was raced in 1987?). I liked the start, where you said that "he dodged but he was too late" - it added the sense of action to the story!
    Tsana (Karl & Robin's mum)


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